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- Some typos (i.e. sapectrum vs. spectrum), suggested punctuation and grammar changes.
- Page 16 "Design for diversity" - "Avoid use of jargon. What is the meaning of flex?"
- Page 18 "Understandability is fundamental to quality care" - "Should we mention health literacy and digital health literacy in the context of virtual healthcare. Maybe add some references?"
- "Practices" lists should start verbs since a practice is an action.
- Page 20 "Supports for using technology" - "Does that include medical devices in a remote patient monitoring context?"
- "Functional needs" - lists should be more consistent and be situated in context of the reader. i.e. "Support communication by ... providing... options for..."
Additional comments in the Word doc:
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